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That's Love by ShayHart That's Love by ShayHart

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I wrote this last night when I couldn't sleep. I like how it turned out (:


Thank you guys for being here for me. It means a lot.
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This is just too impossibly sweet. In the beginning, you can feel the raw emotion, the pain, and it's so sad. And when the boy shows up, and you back away, it's hard to read (though still amazing!) as you see how the character has been hurt. It was so cool to include actual tangible hearts, and I thought that it was very creative, although maybe not the most original thing. The way that it's written though, rules that out. It leaves an impact on the reader, and personally made me want to read it over and over again. Overall, it's a wonderful piece, and so sweet, as usual! <3
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Aww, that's sweet... And the preview pic looks like a heart container!
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ShayHart Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! And yeah it does!
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khdluv2read Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
oh my gosh, thats so sweet c: love it.
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ShayHart Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you (:
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